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How to Write a Terrible Sex Story
Date: 4/23/2015, Categories: Essay, Cruelty, Discipline, Hardcore, Masturbation, Torture, Author: BashfulScribe, Rating: 78.7, Source: sexstories.com
sentences. Example: ' "Do you think we should grill up some burgers?" Asked Sean. "First I think we should find Jordan, then we should grill up some burgers." Jean concluded.' " This can be forgiven in moderation. Nevertheless, the fact that they both used the exact same wording stuck out, didn't it? I've seen stories do this repetitively and it stuck out just as much as an all-caps story. Ultimately, I fixed it through practice by treating dialogue in writing not as extra writing, but as a play waiting to happen. If it didn't sound like a realistic discussion two actual human beings would have, I would then modify it. And that brings us to realism. I honestly have no clue where to begin here. I lied, actually I do: Not every girl in the world is a slut waiting to happen. I don't find pride in people telling me that my story is one of the more believable of its kind - the guy has casual sex with three different girls at his school. By all means, brag about how that was your freshman year (or maybe 'brag' about it while secretly trying to reaffirm your masculinity and hide the fact that you actually lost your virginity at 22+ like a surprisingly high number of people) but this doesn't happen to anybody but a very low number of people, even lower in freshman year. Human beings aren't built that way. They're primarily emotional creatures. We can poo-poo this theory all you want, but the older I get and the more sex I experience, the more I realize that the old saying "sex ...