1. How to Write a Terrible Sex Story


    Date: 4/23/2015, Categories: Essay, Cruelty, Discipline, Hardcore, Masturbation, Torture, Author: BashfulScribe, Rating: 78.7, Source: sexstories.com

    would equivocate to suicide for your views and ratings. My solution in Being More Social, which can be found at Adult Fan Fiction and Stories Online was to have the character jumped by the school slut, only to have her take a liking to him. Was it realistic? No. I did develop Adam, the main character, enough by this point to have people understand what kind of person he was though. Through the acts that followed, sex or otherwise, Nicole revealed her personality too. But sex wasn't commonplace. Character development and how the characters acted in mundane situations or other problems non-sex-related happened, because that's how real life plays out. The trouble with making a sex-centric porn story is that once the novelty of sex wears off, there's nowhere to go. It's troubling when all of your sex scenes feel the same, maybe only changed by the protagonist banging a different girl whose only differences are her eyes and hair color. In a story, we need to know who these people are, and how they interact. Sources: "Chris and Christie" by theblackknight "She is the One" by Jashley13 (also available at Adult Fan Fiction) "An Incest Birthday" by nivek_88 Interaction is very overlooked in terms of correlation to sex. The idea of status plays in heavily here, and this is where stroke story characters lose their realism. Status in terms of how two people interact should correlate in terms of sex. This is true even when the tables are turned. Using my story again as an example of ...
    this, While sometimes Adam is the forceful one and sometimes Nicole is, it's important to note that until she gets emotional, Nicole is always in command. She is higher status. Shy insecure Adam, who is essentially taught sex by Nicole, is lower status. This reflects in their conversations, their sex, and their actions. In the best porn stories, as with the best stories, a character shouldn't interact with any two people in the exact same way. Human beings act differently around different human beings. Now, if you're writing a stroke story, if you want to make it just a little bit better try status play. There's an interesting piece called "After School Part 2" by raj007 I discovered once. In every other way it's unremarkable (it showcases how punctuation can make your story silly among other things) but I have to say, for a stroke story it doesn't status play really well. It shows who is higher status, how that affects their conversations, and how it affects their relationship. The events are ridiculous and it's basically just sex, but the interactions frankly aren't that bad. Gotta give credit where credit is due. If you're an aspiring porn story writer and you take only two things from this, please make it to flesh out characters and give them status please. Make each character their own person with their own traits (a novice strategy is to make Sims of them and jot down their personality traits, then use those traits to influence how they talk and what they do) and figure out ...
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