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Prelude to Shattered Memories
Date: 12/12/2014, Categories: Fantasy, Male/Female, Romance, Young, Author: Bleargh, Rating: 82.6, Source: sexstories.com
following me." The smile was still in her voice. "How about a bit of both?" I replied. That drew a small laugh out of her. "Oh good, roommate and stalker. Greaaaat. So, what do I call you, roomie-stalker?" Now, I want to say I said something suave and sophisticated. Bond. James Bond. Sadly, reality is a thing, so I opted for, you know, the normal thing to say. "Hill. Oscar Hill." Have I mentioned my personality is retarded? Well, it is. Deal with it. Fortunately, it drew another singsong laugh from her. "Well, Mr. Hill, I'm Cassie. Cassie Laine." Kay, I'm going to stop here for the next few hours. Don't worry, I'll be back really, really soon. I just want to know what you guys think of the pace, the style, the constant transition from past to present tense. The foreboding undertone. All that good shit (which may or may not be actually good). Also, the girl's name won't be Cassie Laine in the actual first chapter. I just put it in there as an Easter egg. Cassie's a pornstar (who you can view on xnxx) and she looks freakishly similar to the person the character is based on. Well, feedback plx. The chapter will be up by tomorrow.