1. Divine Succession - Chapter 15 - END


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    away from the temptation of divine power.” “And if she turns bad again?” “When she dies I’ll judge her, and give her the appropriate punishment or reward.” “I see. You’re staying as God then?” “Yes. This power is incredible. I see now that I was wrong to trust it to anyone but me. I’m God, not Samantha.” “It’s okay Lord. Mistakes are natural. You’re only human.” “And I should have listened to you, Amia. I’m sorry.” “You need not apologise to me Lord. Trust me, there have been far worse Gods than you in the past.” “I promise to listen to you in the future.” “That is probably wise, but please don’t take my word as law. Part of my job is to train you to be able to act independently as God.” “Still, I’ll be glad to have you by my side.” “And I will be glad to serve you, Lord.” ------------------------------- Author's message: Finally then, this story is over. I can't say I'm sad to see it end; I've not enjoyed this story for weeks, ever since it became apparent it was nowhere near as popular or, more importantly, GOOD, as A Boy and his Genie. Seriously, I've been re-reading A Boy and his Genie and wishing (If you'll pardon the pun) that this story was as good. It's why I'm glad for this story to end; I've not particularly enjoyed it. As I'm sure you're aware, I was originally going to have the story feature David going mad with power and turning into a tyrant, with the story either ending as him ...
    realising what he'd done was wrong, Amia convincing him to retire, or the original God turning up. Thanks to comments received after Chapter 7 however, this was changed to Samantha being corrupted, and I think the story's better for it. As for the future, I'm going on holiday for 2 weeks tomorrow. When I come back, I might wait a little bit before starting on my next story. My 4th story will be a return to the Boy and his Genie universe, definitely. I have several ideas in my head for what that might entail. My initial thought was to detail the life of David Brookman, Alex's grandfather, and his creation of the Society. While this is tempting, I have another idea I'm probably going to go with. I won't tell you exactly what it is, since it would spoil it for you, but I have the first couple of chapters planned out in my head. I certainly won't post it until I have 3 or 4 chapters finished, and more important, I'm going to PLAN it before I write it. A Boy and his Genie and Divine Succession were both written with very little idea of where they'd end up going. It worked for the former, but I think the low ratings and viewing figures for this story show that it isn't necessarily the best option. I probably had something else I wanted to say here, but I can't remember. So all I'm going to say is sorry for this story not being as good as my last, and let's hope my next one is better. See you in mid-September ish!
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